Date: 09/25/12 04:44 AM Title: two: black and white
a) WHY U SO BRILLIANT
b) harry as a bookwarm & louis the bad boi..I LIKE IT
c) how do you know so much about guys masturbating omfg
ARE U SECRETLY A GUY? O.o
anywhores, i luuuuv this. KEEP ON WRITING!
and bring on the larry..SOON
Date: 09/23/12 10:22 AM Title: two: black and white
That last part was extremely well written...I could fell it...and I don't even have a penis!!!! Ha!!!
Loving this story!
well i would hope you don'th have a penis, i don't think that would work out well.
Date: 09/23/12 12:17 AM Title: two: black and white
This is perfect.
I LOVE that you're building up the character of each boy before you have them meet. Honestly I just cannot stop admiring you for that.
When I saw that you had posted in the 'Updates' thread I was like asdfjk;l asdfjk; asdfjk;l
I almost screamed.
That smut was very well-written. Tbh i dont like reading smut so i skipped over it but i know that it was because the lines i did read were graphic and that shizznit.
“Exactly. Now. I’m not going to deal with your bullshit.
is my favorite line. because like. when alec cobain said that to louis i just thought of BULLSHIT and then i thought - oh, he means, i'm not going to deal with your denial of larry hahaha.
sorry i had to.
Date: 09/22/12 11:56 PM Title: two: black and white
"his exquisite amount of ass"
MY FAVORITE PART OF LOUIS' THING OKAY AHAHAH
but as for harry
is it wrong to say i'm not sexually frustrated.
okay i dont care i'll say it anyway
you write good smut
i can't wait to see lou fucking harry into the sheets
omg i love you
Date: 09/22/12 11:23 PM Title: two: black and white
FETUS HARRY PR0N 6EVER
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS IT'S EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED AND MORE IT WAS
what kind of perverted six year old would write smut Ari you little heathen
I can't speak Englidhsjhshshsh
take me to heaven